Hey everyone! Feel free to start blogging; we would love to hear your comments about our Experimental!
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mrs. sroka
4/22/2010 02:52:23 am
you need to open your response page for all and take off the check mark next to approve all responses. Also come by and get your CD from the video camera. I can not edit the movie - there is special software that comes with your camera that allows you to download the movie.
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Brooke Roitman
4/22/2010 08:25:37 am
Remy, Lauren, and Jen --
What a bold move it was, taking on the first experimental date of the 2010 season. However, without much surprise, the three of you raised the bar and proved to put together a lovely presentation. I particularly enjoyed your presenting of the idea of "Tikkun Olam." This was such a beautiful way of portraying a technique to give us a way to leave our own legacy on the world today. You really took your experimental as a way to present a good cause, "repairing the world." I also appreciated the picture of all of your hands to represent your impact as a group. This was a very creative and unique way to tie yourselves to the art section of your connections. It was also adorable how you included the interview with the North Sider on her views on legacy. I could tell it really caught everyones attention to hear a youthful perspective rather than just expertise facts. You're hard work and abundance of research definitely shined through. Without doubt, the three of you left behind your very own legacy for the rest of us "experimentalers" to follow your lead!
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Alec $chure
4/25/2010 01:37:02 pm
Wow. All I can say. What made this such an amazing experimental was how powerful it was. All of you made me realize how everyone makes a legacy on the world, and how I want mine to be a positive one. The vast array of interviews, from the funny and cute North Siders, to the Holocaust survivor made me realize how everyone has their own view on what a legacy truly is. I also love how you incorporated leaders that we all knew into your discussion, such as Bill Clinton. You begged the question of what kind of legacy he has created, the one of being a cheating husband, or the one of being a good President? I deeply enjoyed the personals, such as Lauren tracing her family's roots. I personally believe that our legacy is strongly impacted by family, and I'm sure the knowledge she gained will help her build hers. (And Remy, I am looking forward to hearing you sing yours)Finally, as Brooke said, "Tikkum Olam" and repairing the world made a big impact on me personally. Those made an interesting and enjoyable experimental also a powerful one. This is an experimental that I can truly say I enjoyed every second of and changed the way I look at how I want to make an impact. I know I will aspire to have my experimental near this one's level come May.
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Diana B.
4/26/2010 11:29:11 am
Hey guys! Very nice work. You did a very good job of setting the bar for the experimentals to come. Your decorations were great and you made the room feel alive. I loved all of your personals. Too bad we didn't get to hear Remy sing. By how many slides you had and the fact that you went beyond the bell tells me that you guys did your reasearch and knew what you were talking about. You did a great job of keeping the audience interested and on the edge of there seats. I loved the northsiders interview, it was cute and we were able to have a "flash back into the past" by remembering what we wanted when we were younger. The Holocaust survivor that you had interviewed was very cool. You aren't able to get the real effect of the emotions by someone who wasn't there. Your topic got me thinking about what I want my legacy to be. This is a very important question to ask yourself. It is what you will be remembered by and I would like to make a good impression on the world.
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Matt Bernstein
4/26/2010 11:37:15 am
The three of you definitely set the bar high for everyone else. The first thing I noticed after walking into the room was the variety of index cards that were placed on each seat. Before you guys even started presenting, the audience was enlightened with information about your topic. I thought that was a very beneficial way to use your time wisely. Additionally, I liked the part where you talked about celebrities and about how the media alters our views on what is good or bad about them. It’s ridiculous how many times you see a magazine or newspaper that dramatizes and exaggerates a piece of information in order to make someone look either good or bad, while at the same time, helping them sell papers and get better headlines. That really made me think. Why are those who perform acts of service like doctors and firemen not highlighted for what they have done in our society? Don’t you think that they should be the ones who should be praised and remembered for their accomplishments? In this day and age, our society seems to consider famous singers, athletes, and actors more important. Moreover, I enjoyed your interviews. You had an impressive display of people who you interviewed. Starting with the Holocaust survivor and moving onto the little North Siders, these people in your videos made me realize that everyone would like to be remembered for something significant that they have already or will accomplish. This view eventually led up to your survey results, which certainly emphasized your point; that is, to show that everyone wants to leave a positive mark on this world. Lastly, all of your personals were very well-done and really helped make your topic a lot more interesting to your audience. Overall, your presentation was borderline okay (joking). You three did an excellent job. You were well prepared and gave the audience a sense that you knew what you were talking about. Congrats.
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Renita Alexander
4/27/2010 06:45:16 am
Jen, Remy, and Lauren--
Wow, you guys definitely did set the bar for the 09-10 experimentals very high, as every one else has said before. When I first walked into the room, I noticed all the decorations in the back of the room and the pictures that the North Siders created. They were eye-catching, and very interesting to look at after your experimental was over. Also, I liked the way you got the audience to think about different types of legacy by placing the index cards on each seat. Something that I really enjoyed was how, instead of introducing your experimental as just a project, you introduced it as a museum. This technique was very effective at capturing the audiences attention. Lauren, I would especially like to commend you on your personal. Tracing back your roots is a very imaginative way to show legacy. Remy, I am so sorry that you weren't able to sign for your personal, I love your voice, and can't wait for you to sing in class. Your interviews with the Holocaust survivor and the North Siders were able to show 2 different sides to legacy, which I thought were very interesting. I think the highlight of your experimental for me was the concept of "Tikkum Olam", and the thought of being able to change the world, by just doing one simple act of good. It has definitely given me something to think about, and isn't that the point of these experimentals, to gain knowledge and also to help people look at your topic from a different view other than their first perception? Lastly, I would just like to commend all of you for being able to bring legacy into each of your lives by created that art piece with your hands. The symbolism behind was very intriguing. All-in-all this was an amazing experimental and congratulations on your success.
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Rory Heller
4/27/2010 11:49:02 am
Hey daredevils! I think I was more nervous walking into your experimental than mine, you being the first. I couldn't wait to see what our grade would bring to this project which is truly 10p students' "legacy." Your passion for your topic came across in each slide, and you, quite literally, never wanted it to end. Neither did I! I felt I walked out with a new look on old material. I don't think I'll be able to eat my frosted flakes without thinking of Tony the Tiger's legacy that you pointed out. You guys branched off into fields outside the main subjects, which illustrated that you mastered the skills of networking and thinking out of the box. I loved the collection of interviews about the time capsule. I think that simple question reveals so much about a person. I never once felt uncomfortable during your presentation, which I unfortunately can't say about everyone. I hope you guys are enjoying some relaxation time, you deserve it!
May 1, 2010 Hi Jen, Remy, and Lauren, On April 19th, you three opened our 10P Experimental Season for 2009—10, setting in motion what will become your grade’s “legacy,” in a sense, at least in terms of this particular course and its centerpiece tradition. As you’ve read on your audience response blog, your classmates felt both proud and intimidated by the time they walked out of your astonishing and impressive presentation! “Look at what we’re capable of!” on the one hand (as they imagined the rest of the audience viewers) and “Uh oh, how are we gonna do ours after that??” on the other (as they panicked about their own upcoming experimental). Ah well, to be first has its pro’s and con’s—as in all things (ask David & Landon). Your experimental was so truly impressive because you had a clear and cohesive whole: every bit of what you presented interlinked and built on the preceding section to create a powerful overall message about Legacy. From the start, we entered into a themed room: the Museum, surrounding by meaningful, well chosen décor such as the “legacy tables” with artifacts each of you had gathered to represent your own legacies, the flashbacks of your classmates, and the original art provided by Northside’s future career builders. On our seats, we instantly found cards to draw us into your topic, with mini-bio’s of distinguished individuals. Interviews throughout your presentation introduced us to many other people who have made their mark, from a Holocaust survivor to a charming Northside student. The art—memorably Malevich’s “Woman’s Torso” and Warhol’s “Turquoise Marilyn”—, the music—deGraw’s “I Don’t Want to Be,” “World” & “100 Years” by Five for Fighting, among others—, and the literature—particularly Hoagland’s “Narcissus Lullaby” and the powerful Asher novel “13 Reasons Why”—all made vivid the commentary you offered about your topic throughout. The film clip from Pretty Woman was just perfect! I loved the fashion section as well, especially since I know how much Lauren loves those icons! I thought the additional links you made to history truly enriched the reach and insight of your exploration of this topic. For instance, the points you made about the Eurocentric historiography of “our take” on major past events and how that point of view leads to global intolerance seemed to me both intelligent and important. The science tie-ins were fascinating and worthy of even more time—but of course, we’ll have to visit the website for the additional information. The evolution and archaeology links seem promising but went by so fast; I didn’t quite follow it all. Henrietta Lacks’ story raises so many controversial and ethical issues that I recommend your classmates definitely take a look at this, especially, on the website. I loved the way you included law—very informative. And the fact that many famous people achieve their fame only posthumously was sobering to consider. I’ve often wondered why that is so often true. You offered two credible explanations. Moving toward your personal connections, you shared first the “Tossing Starfish” fable in role-play format, an effective change of pace. And the powerful story of Rachel’s Challenge you conveyed via a Skype interview. The excellent variety of techniques you employed certainly contributed to the high interest level you maintained throughout. Since you spoke with only minimal reliance on notes, and each of you spoke clearly and enthusiastically—even Remy with her uncooperative sore throat! —You captivated your audience from start to finish. Jen, the way your family tradition of being a “brother’s keeper” has become second nature to you is so evident in all you do that it did not take this experimental section to convince me. However, you did deliver a powerful message; take a look at how many audience responders not Tikkun Olam as one of the lasting impressions made on them through your experimental. To inspire others of your generation to “repair the world” as all of the Barrys have for generations: well, that would be quite a legacy, wouldn’t it? Lauren, I have known you for two years now, and family—the benefits they bestow and the calls on you they claim—have consistently seemed central and anchoring for you. I know how much you cherish them and derive so much support and encouragement from them. I did not know that your name means “to fly,” but how fitting! They must have been so pleased to seeing you truly soaring on that day. Your shared movingly and effectively the powerful legacy
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Lauren, I have known you for two years now, and family—the benefits they bestow and the calls on you they claim—have consistently seemed central and anchoring for you. I know how much you cherish them and derive so much support and encouragement from them. I did not know that your name means “to fly,” but how fitting! They must have been so pleased to seeing you truly soaring on that day. Your shared movingly and effectively the powerful legacy your grandparents and parents have so lovingly passed on to you. It seems clear you have taken in their values, will nurture them well, and in time—God willing—will aim to pass them on to your own. Have I mentioned every aspect of your experimental? No. Just the highlights; which only points out further just how expansive and inclusive your project truly was. As you continue in high school and then on to college and life, hold on to the sense of accomplishment and pride that a job truly done with passion and zeal provides. More than other yardsticks offered to me in life, that—THAT FEELING—has been a reliable measure of stuff I’m glad I did. Congratulations, girls. Ms. Bartscherer
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Mahdiyah
5/13/2010 10:44:50 am
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Mahdiyah
5/13/2010 10:52:43 am
I was a little intimidated walking into this experimental and it turned out that i should have been. You three had set the bar ver high being the first group to present. From the decorations to the food everything tied in perfectly. My favorite part was Laurens personal. To truly explain the work Legacy tracing back your family history was a smart idea. I wish we were able to hear your singing Remy. The amount of research was really shown when you presented because it would't fit into one period. My favorite interview was the one with the Northside students asking children with such different views from us was a good way to learn about what they think about. I also like how you guys asked people about what they would want to out in a time machine I do not think i could think of anything to put in that people could remember me by. The idea if the museum was also very creative since it made it look like something other than a presentation. ~Congrats
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Landon B.
5/15/2010 08:16:55 am
Since your Experimental presentation was basically an entire month ago, I had a hard time remembering all the things you talked about; however, what I do remember is walking out of your presentation with a couple of other students, rambling on and on about how amazing it truly was. Since nearly every possible aspect of life has a legacy, there must have been a huge amount information that needed to be explored by you three. From your website, I could really tell that you girls did a surplus of research as well as a large amount of time typing on the website. Legacy is definitely a very hard topic to take on; however, you girls conquered it in fashion. You three really had a lot of courage to lead off the 2010 Experimental season, and you girls most definitely encouraged other students to go see the rest of the presentations, since they probably expected them to all be as good as yours. I can really tell that you girls put huge amounts of your time into this project, and trust me, it really paid off. Since I am having a lot of trouble remembering all of the math, science, history, etc. examples in your presentation, I will not talk about them too much; however, I found your North Side survey to be quite interesting. One thing I would definitely like to mention is your Personals. Jen, it is apparent that many people have had huge impacts on your life. Whether it be your sisters, your parents, your grandma, etc. they have truly contributed to a very successful human being. In addition, saying "hello" or "how are you?" to someone is vital, as you mentioned. These tiny actions have the largest effects on people, even though you may not know it. Lauren, your story about your family's legacy was very intriguing. Your cousin Richard's family tree helped your family learn a lot about your ancestors, which is always interesting. The fact that there were three generations of Lituchys in the audience was, in addition, a nice little extra touch. And last but most definitely not least, Remy. Preparing to sing in front of an audience must have been tough. All those hours of preparation must be hard to look back on, since you weren't able to share what you accomplished. I know that whenever you decide to sing for us, it will be great. If I were in your shoes I would be very mad, as I'm sure you were that day; however, when you eventually do perform, it will be amazing! Congratulations on an awesome Experimental. You set the bar very high for the following presentations, which was quite unfortunate for us; however, it was definitely good for you three. Your hard work truly paid off, and you girls should be really proud of yourselves. Great Job!!!
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Christine Calamia
5/16/2010 02:05:53 am
Wow I must say for being the first experimental it was really brave, intelligent, and amazing. The one thing that caught my eye was all the decorations you guys had displayed, which was very creative and had me very interested. I also really liked how you placed index cards on the chairs; it was a good strategy to get the audience involved. When you started the presentation with everyone’s opinion of what they wanted to be remembered for, I thought it was very clever and it gave us an idea of how other students of Wheatley feel. I also thought you chose the perfect song to go along with that video. One part that really caught my attention was when you mentioned how “when someone dies how do you remember him or her by?” For example, Michael Jackson, he has had his many issues along the way, but as soon as we found out he had passed away, people treated him almost like a hero, but think about what happened before his death, should we? Also, I found Tiger Woods as a very good example as well. You guys all have so much music and songs that are so relevant to this topic and really make me think. Speaking of songs, Remy, I was so upset that you were sick because I’ve heard you sing in class and you have quite a talent. Lauren, I thought by tracing back your family was a great idea and was very interesting. I had recently tried to trace back my family when I thought another student in our trade could possible be my cousin, and as we kept tracing back it was very possible we were. Also, it gives you a better idea who you are and where you came from. So by doing this experimental, you learn something new about yourself. Jen, your personal was very effective on the audience. I think everyone should take what you say in account, because with the help from everyone we can make great change and a better world. People like you and your family are a hope to spread this around and influence others to help as well. I find helping others and making a difference is one of the greatest dreams a person can hold and I wish you the best of luck to whatever your future entails. Also, the interview with the Holocaust survivor was very interesting because you’re hearing the story from someone who was actually there, not people just writing about it in a book. One more thing I really thought was great was when you mentioned Rachel’s Challenge. I remember when they came to or school and almost every person in the audience was crying. We studied the Columbine Massacre as well in our experimental, and I found it interesting how you could take it and turn it into another way, like legacy. As I looked on your website I could see all the hard work and research you guys did. I could go on forever typing how much I loved it and what I loved, but that would take a while:). I thought your presentation and your work was amazing and when I walked out I remember saying “WOW”, and that’s what an experimental should do. Great Job guys, you did great!
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Kristen L.
5/16/2010 05:52:33 am
Hey guys! First off, I'd like to congratulate you guys for setting the bar on all of the experimentals. It was really daring of you to go first, but it really paid off in the end. The whole idea of "legacy" is an interesting one. I loved how you included the poem "Narcissus Lullaby", since it is very haunting yet all the while so "right". Everyone does want to be rememebered--not just as some great historical figure but as anyone who was anyone to the people we've encountered and known in our lifetimes. I really liked how you included this sect of the whole topic of Legacies, since not everyone is as ambitious to want such legacies as those of the great thinkers in modern medicine and in the media. I was also interested in how you included interviews with Holocaust survivors, though that area seemed a tad rushed. Your interviews with Northside kids were cute. All of your personals came at nice intervals and added nice touches to your overall presentation. Jen - Yours reflected the overall legacy everyone inherently wishes to have (as you showed in your Northside interviews): to impact the world even through simple acts. Lauren - I thought it was really cool how you researched something as extensive as your family tree. Remy - I look forward to hearing your performance, though I wish you could have at least explained the connection between legacy and either your singing overall or the song you wanted to sing, just so that we could get a little preview and also that we could have heard that portion even without your beautiful singing to supplement it. However, aside from that, I want to congratulate you for pulling off the wonderful oral presentation that you did with the limited vocal energy that you had. I'm glad that your throat is better, and I'm so sorry that your cold came with such terrible timing. Overall, great job guys! Thanks for the enlightenment (:
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Michelle Kalish
5/16/2010 01:53:13 pm
I think that, going into this project as the first experimental, you guys did a great job. You had no examples or ideas of how people in our grade were presenting their topic, and you still did wonderfully. You were the original example I went back to when I thought about how different everyone's experimentals were. The topic that you chose was highly original and I could really tell that you guys added your interests throughout. You stayed very true to your own passions and likes. I really got a sense of each of you in different topics as the powerpoint when on. Each of your personals was very different: Jen's being about her actions, Lauren's about her familial background, and Remy's connecting her talent that she will be remembered for(which I am still anxiously waiting to hear) to present to us a very famous song. You all spoke well and were completely aware while presenting. You knew what you were saying and had everything on cue properly. I was so sorry to leave before it was over, but I do look forward to seeing the completed website to catch up on anything I missed out on. Wonderful job girls!
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Victoria G.
5/16/2010 01:54:42 pm
Seeing your experimental, as the first, did make me a bit nervous. You guys set the bar extremely high for everyone else to follow! Walking out, I remember everyone talking about how nervous they now were for their own experimental. You guys really did an excellent job! It was easy to tell how much work you each put into this. Each slide was packed with information, which easily flowed into the next. My favorite part, by far, was the ‘museum’ theme. What a great idea! You really worked the food and decorations into your topic, and this theme very well. I was a little upset when I heard that Remy was not able to sing, but it still leaves me looking forward to something else to come from your group. I also really loved the clip you made up of what people want to be remembered for. It really did get me to think about what people will remember me for. i think that people often mix up the question of what they WANT to be remembered for, and what people WILL remember them for, because people often think of them as the same thing when in reality; these are two very different questions. I don’t know where I sit thinking about this, but your experimental really got me to think about it. I really did love your experimental, it was intelligent, touching, and haunting all at once! Excellent job guys.
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Zach Lessen
5/17/2010 02:51:17 am
Great job on being the first experimental. You guys set the bar very high and influenced our experimental with your tremendous one. Your museum decorations and cafe were very relevant and were amazing. I was especially intrigued by the interview with the representative of Rachel's Challenge. It showed the power and true meaning of Legacy. I also was interested by the fact that Jen's ancestors were in the same sorrority houses, which showed how your legacy can live on through generations. Remy I feel sorry that you lost your voice and I look forward to hearing you sing in class. Lauren, your personal left a profound impact on me and my views towards my family. Jen's personal about Tikkun Olam further enhanced my understanding of the topic. I agree with Michelle that all of your personals were very different but together they conveyed the powerful message of legacy. I admire your courage for going first and really enjoyed watching your experimental.
Jen, Lauren & Remy, you did an amazing job on this project. You can tell all the hard work you put into it. There was a ton of great information and I loved the whole experimental. Great job!!!
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Danielle K.
5/18/2010 12:05:37 pm
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Danielle K.
5/18/2010 12:19:30 pm
^SORRY for the last post.
Remy, Lauran, Jen, GREAT JOB! I would first like to comment on your decorations. They were excellent, and just so filling. I also wanted to say how you guys did such a great job even though Remy had lost her voice. I was really pleased with the information I got out of it and I am happy to say that it was a great presentation. Legacy is an interesting topic in it self. It is very cool how I was able to learn more about a word I believed I already knew. I loved your interviews with the kids, but I was very upset that we weren't able to finish the whole video. I really wished to see that again! But the kids drawings were just so cute. I also really enjoyed watching the interview of the holocaust survivor. I found it very interesting and wished I was able to hear more about it. (I'm not sure where to watch it on your website.) Genocide was my most memorable part. I'm just so interesting in things about the Holocaust and I was able to learn something new about Darfurian civilization. For the personals I liked it how they were all pretty personal. Lauran with her family tree (which was fascinating), and Remy and her willingness to start charity. I was upset that Remy wasn’t able to sing for us (you do have an amazing voice.) I just hope we get to hear the song you were going to perform soon! Over all fantastic job!
